高中英语读后续写精彩的结尾技巧

一、画面定格 01人物动作的画面定格如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考）Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingforthe rushing holidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedher mother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectio|naroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.如：Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthe sodatin firmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift. Speec|hlessand happy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.如：Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface，“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid，“Tomorrowyoucanbecome humanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterfl|ywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedto enjoy thesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.特殊寓意的写景画面（1）Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.    天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一|起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面） （2） Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.   黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。 （黎明到来的画面） （3） ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangep|aintonabluecanvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。 （美好日落时的画面） 

1（4）Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面） （5）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthen|ightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.   被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面） （6）Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'sra|ys.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.    抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意） （7）Dottedwithglittering stars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝|色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面） （8）Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）   Theraindrummedonthewindow,b|iddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。 （雨水来临的画面） （9）TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstro