英语六级写作4——例子和图表

英语六级写作4——例子和图表Directions"Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHasteMakesWaste.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.1.为什么"欲速则不达"？2.举例说明。谚语格言题文章逻辑结构：ParagraphI:（1）点明要阐|释的谚语或名言(general)；（2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻辑(specific)。ParagraphII:（1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；（2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。ParagraphIII:（1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。HasteMakesWasteBy"Hastemakeswaste"ismeantthatoneshoulddoeveryth|ingstepbystep.Evensimpleoperationscaneasilybespoiledifwerushtocompletethem,neglectingimportantstagesintheprocess.Oneshouldmakefullpreparationsbeforebeginningantask.注：spoilt=spoiled被毁坏；Sparetherod,spoilthechild.棍棒出孝子

1TakeEnglishstudyforexample.Withouta|goodcommandofpronunciation,wecanneverhopetospeakinanunderstandableway.Similarly,ifwedonotlearntospellproperlyandtoacquireabasicgraspofgrammar,wewillneversucceedinwritinggoodcomposition.Inshort,layingasolidfoundationisessentialifwewanttomakeachievements|inourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.Ateverystep,reviewwhathasbeenachievedandassesstheproblemsaheadbeforemovingtothenextstep.Andremember,Romewasnotbuiltinaday.注：layingasolidfoundation打下坚实的基础英文学习和体育锻炼作为例子[讲义P7]Example:AnEnglishproverbsa|ys,Oneofthegreatmenonceremarked,"HasteMakesWaste".Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb:Itmeansthat……Inotherwords,History/Oursocietyaboundswiththeexamplesof"HasteMakesWaste".…….Ontheotherhand/Onthecontrary,…….

2Foruscollegestudents,the|saying/proverbhasaprofoundandrealisticsignificance:…….图表题：三图一表--柱状图（BarGraph）、线形图(LineGraph)、饼状图(PieGraph)、表格(Table)图表题文章写作逻辑结构：ParagraphI:（1）描述图表：趋势描写；（2）描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。ParagraphII:（1）提出自己理由和观点；（2）细节性分论点（支持自己观点）。ParagraphIII:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法；（2）总结全文和表|达作者自己观点。CarAccidentsDeclininginWaltonCityAccordingtothegraph,theriseandfalloftherateofcaraccidentsinWalton

3Cityvarieswiththeseasons.FromJanuarytoMarchlastyearitincreasedby68%,fromMarchtoJuneitdroppedbyabouthalfthepreviousrate;andfromJunetoAugusttherew|asasteepriseof66.6%.Afterthat,however,therewasasteadydecrease,andthismakesusoptimisticthatcaraccidentsaredeclininginWaltonCity.注：1.Accordingtothegraph如图所示，还可以说成Ascanbeseenfromthegraphincreaseby上升了increaseto上升到2.steeprise陡然上升，steadydecrease缓慢下降Therearet|hreereasonsforthisimprovement.First,newtrafficregulationshavemadedriversmorecareful,法律法规second,morepeopleareusingbicyclesfortransportation,andthird,inthelaterpartoftheyeargoodweathermadetheroadssafertodriveon.Thisyear,majorroadshave