新高中考试英语读后续写示例与写作训练10

读后续写示例与写作训练10【写作示例】【原文呈现】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Changeisdefinedastogiveadifferentposition,course,ordirectionto. Changeisessentialinlifebecauseyoulearnfromchangeanditgivesyouanewroutetotakeinlife. Manypeopleinlifetendtonotunderstandchangebutit’stheonesthatdowhoarethesuccessfulones.Fory|earsnowIhavenoideawhatIhavebeendoingwithmylife. IwakeupeverymorningashamedofthepersonIamtoday,andfallasleepwiththesamemindset. Iplayeverythinginlifebythebookandneverdoanythingoutoftheordinary.Iama30-year-oldlawyerinNewYork. IspentmostofmylifeinschoolperusingajobinLaw. Butbeingalawyerwasnever|mydreamorgoalinlife.IhonestlywantedtobeaWriter. Ihaveagreatimaginationandwouldwriteamazingstoriesinmyhead. Iwouldwriteaboutslayingdragonsandlifefarbeyondwhatwecanimaginetoday. Ialwaysknewthatbeingawriterwasneverpossibleformebecauseitwasabetterfinancialdecisiontostayalawyer.Recently,thedayswe|reabnormalforme. UsuallyIwouldfallasleepattenandwakeupatsevenanddrivetomyofficesoIcangettoworkontime. ButforsomereasonIcouldn’tgotosleep,andwhenIdidfallasleepIhadthesamedreamoverandoveragain. Itwasn’tadreamIhadeverhadinthepast. Thedreamstartswithmeintheoceantryingtogoforaswimsearchingforsome|thing,butforsomereasonIstarttodrownandIcan’tevengaspforair. Ihavenocontrolovermybody. ThenalightshinesthroughthebrightwatersandwhenIlookup,allIcanseeismyselfinabrightwhiteroomwritinganovel. TheIheardavoicesayrepeatedly“nowisthetimetotrysomethingnew”.注意：

11.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键|词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。Paragraph1:ThatafternoonIquitmyjobatthelawfirmandIcouldn’thavebeenanyhappier. _____________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Mylifestartedat30,andeverydaysincethatpointIhaven’tstoppedenjoyinglife._____________________|____________________________________________【思维路径】[核心内容]文本主要内容为：一位30岁的女律师曾经为了在律师行业取得好的职位，花了大量的时间去学习法律；但是当她在律师行业干了数年之后，她发现虽然收入很高，但她并不喜欢这种严谨的、循规蹈矩的生活。于是，在她30岁的时候，她辞去这个工作，去追寻自己想当作家的梦想；后来的生活经历证明，她当年的抉择是正确的。[写作思路](1)明确故事主题(theme)。本文作者开篇就告诉我们“改变”(change)在生活中的重要性，如“Changeisessentialinlifebecauseyou|learnfromchangeanditgivesyouanewroutetotakeinlife”这句话告诉我们“改变”能给我们的生活带来新的可能性。然后，作者通过自己的亲身经历进一步说明这一主题。(2)理清主人公的矛盾所在(conflicts)。从文章中的“Iama30-year-oldlawyerinNewYork. IspentmostofmylifeinschoolperusingajobinLaw. Butbeingalawyerwasnevermydreamorgoalinlife.”可知，作者本来是在追求大多数人梦寐以求的律师职业，但后来发现

2自己并不是真正喜|欢这一职业，而自己真正喜欢的是当作家。之后，根据文中的“Thedreamstartswithmeintheoceantryingtogoforaswimsearchingforsomething,butforsomereasonIstarttodrownandIcan’tevengaspforair. Ihavenocontr